SNEAK PEEK: first draft of chapter 1 – Desert Steve novel

This is the first draft of chapter one of new historical fiction novel by Markus McDowell, based on the life of Desert Steve Ragsdale.

A sneak peek of a first draft from Markus McDowell’s current novel in progress.


โ€œSarah! Sarah!โ€ His voice boomed across the dusty farmhouse lands. The little girl came running our from behind the barn, the family beagle chasing after.

โ€œYes, daddy?!โ€ Her calico sundress was dingy and a bit ragged. Albert grimaced at what the dirt might be.

โ€œI need you to come get your brother and babysit himโ€”Iโ€™m going into town to get Doctor Johannsen.โ€

She screeched to a halt in front of the tall, bearded man. โ€œIs it mommy? Is the new baby here?โ€

He smiled, his rough features softening. โ€œYes, Sarah, she has started her contractions.โ€ He didnโ€™t tell her that the contractions were quite painful, along with other discomfort reported by his wife. He worried about a breach. โ€œNow run and get him. Iโ€™ll be right back. Leave your mom alone.โ€

He watched her disappeared into the house, the screen door slamming behind her, trapping the puppy outside who began to squeal and dance about the door. He knew she would do exactly as he saidโ€”for seven years old, she was remarkably mature and responsible.

James strode to his horse, already saddled and bridled, tied up at the post. Heโ€™d had a premonition it might be today, even though this was early. Something about this pregnancy was different than the other two.

The doctor’s office was on Main Street in the little townโ€”really still an Indian trading post, in many ways, only founded 20 years ago by Colonel James Coffey. It had grown a lot in those twenty years, for sure, but had not lost the frontier feel. There was talk of the railroad coming throughโ€”that would really change the town. James wasnโ€™t sure heโ€™d welcome the changes. He liked individual people, but as a group, humans tended to be selfish, irresponsible, and not too bright.

It wasnโ€™t far down the roadโ€”the Ragsdale farm was only a mile outside the town. He didnโ€™t really need the doctorโ€”he had delivered Sarahโ€™s brother Charlie himself because the birth came in the middle of the night. But always better to have the expert on hand if possible. Especially this time. James had a feeling this baby was going to be a rough one.

*

The doctor called James back into the room. Phebe was resting, baby in arms, nursing. She gave him a tired smile. He nodded.

The doctor was packing up his bag. โ€œWell, that was a rip-snorter, James. You got one obstinate boy there.โ€

โ€œNormal?โ€

โ€œYup. All copacetic. Healthy cry, which they probably heard back in town. Phebe and the baby will be fine. Nowโ€ฆโ€ He rummaged in the bag and pulled out some papers. โ€œNeed to fill out the birth certificate.โ€ He sat down at the desk and prepared his pen and ink.

โ€œWhatโ€™s the name of the boy?โ€

James told him, and he carefully inscribed the full name on the form. โ€œGood, good. Nice strong name. Parents full names?โ€

โ€œJames Albert Ragsdale and Phebe Ann Ragsdale.โ€

โ€œAges?โ€

โ€œWeโ€™re both 28.โ€

The doctor filled out a few more lines, muttering to himself dates and places. He finished writing, then pulled another form out of his bag and painstakingly copied the information from the first card. Once it was completed, he laid the copy aside and put the paper, pens, and inkwell away in his bag.

โ€œThank you, doctor, Iโ€™ll render payment tomorrow.โ€

โ€œNo hurry, James, Iโ€™ll just repossess if you donโ€™t pay.โ€ He cackled. James smiled politelyโ€”the Doc repeated that joke at almost every call. โ€œNo need to walk me out.โ€

James went to his wife. The baby was sleeping soundly now, having had quite an ordeal to enter the world. The expression on baby Steveโ€™s face looked like he was both thrilled to be in the world, but also a bit unsure about it. As if he knew it would not be an easy life.

And itโ€™s not, James thought to himself. But it is a good one, blessed by the Lord with land, three children, a good work to do with oneโ€™s hands.

โ€œJames, call the children.โ€

At his bellow, Sarah and Charlie came in. Sarah had already seen one newbornโ€”Charlieโ€”when she was five, and made her way right over to the bed, touching little Steveโ€™s cheek. But Charlie stood waiting in the doorway, twisting his hands together and fidgeting.

โ€œGo on over, Charlie. Say hello to your new brother.

โ€œWhatโ€™s his name, daddy?โ€

โ€œSteve Albert Ragsdale.โ€

*

โ€œOh, you are so stubborn!โ€

โ€œWho are you talking to?โ€ James thought it was a song from the other room.

โ€œYour new son!โ€ She laughed as James entered the room. He looked down at the infant, struggling in her lap as she tried to get him to latch on to her breast. โ€œHe just has to have things just so. He wants to be on his left, not his right. Has to have this blanket around himโ€”he knows when it isnโ€™t this one!โ€

James smiled. โ€œSmart boy. Like his brother and sister.โ€

โ€œMaybe smarter. He knows how he wants things, thatโ€™s for sure.โ€

James laughed. โ€œThatโ€™s a Ragsdale trait, for sure. Heโ€™ll do just fine.โ€ He approached the chair where she and Steve were sitting. โ€œIโ€™m headed into town. Theyโ€™ve started new services on the LL&G line from Chicago and Philadelphia. Gonna be lots of new businesses coming in!โ€ Nine years ago, when the Leavenworth, Lawrence & Galveston Railroad had made the town a stop along the way, the outpost had boomed into a full-blow midwestern town. Until then, it was called just the Outpost, or James Coffeyโ€™s Outpost. When the railroad was completed, it needed a real city name. Colonel Coffey and Captain Blanton flipped a coin. Coffey won, and the town became โ€œCoffeyville.โ€ There was a bit of a flub when it came to incorporating, but it finally was official in 1872.

โ€œYou thinking of taking a new job?โ€ She smiled. It didnโ€™t bother her in the least. Theyโ€™d been married for eight years, but sheโ€™d known him since they were kids.

โ€œHa. No. But where there is growth, there is opportunity. Iโ€™m going to see if I can offer some of my services to the crews when they get closer to town.โ€

โ€œGood idea.โ€

โ€œWho knows? With the railroad, this town is going to change a lot. Joe Parsons was complainingโ€”said he voted against the rail coming here and now things were out of control.โ€

โ€œI havenโ€™t seen much bad. The general market and the stores are so mucin better.โ€

โ€œWho knows? Growth brings both good and bad. Thatโ€™s the way. But it does no good to kick against the goads. Manโ€™s gotta accept what he canโ€™t change, and turn it to his advantage. Maybe somedayโ€ฆโ€ he reached down and placed his large, rough hand on Steveโ€™s head. The boy stopped his struggling and crying. โ€œโ€ฆmaybe someday weโ€™ll have a big business hereโ€”more than one, if all my plans come to fruition. Steve here can run one of them someday!โ€

โ€œWell, letโ€™s let him grown up a little bit first, my love?โ€

Steve, now silent and still, stretch up and latched on to his motherโ€™s breast. His mother smiled. โ€œYou always did have the magic touch, my dear.โ€

โ€œEh. Godโ€™s blessings is all.โ€ He leaned down to give her a peck on the cheek. โ€œBe back in a couple of hours.โ€

Little Steve pulled way and turned to watch his dad leave, then resumed his meal.


Cover of Nuff Sed: A Novel of Desert Steve by Markus McDowell.

A captivating historical fiction saga that traces the indomitable spirit of “Desert” Steve Ragsdale, a man who helped shape the American West. 

In 1921, after losing his Kansas cotton farm to an inability to pay the taxes, Steve ventures into California’s desert with a bold vision. Defying a harsh land and no roads except ruts in the sands, he founds the town of Desert Centerโ€”a beacon of resilience amid heat and hardship. From his early days in Coffeyville, Kansas, confronting outlaws, to navigating the Great Depression, World War II, and the rise of Eagle Mountain Mine, Steve’s journey is one of grit, humor, and unwavering conviction. His motto, “Nuff sed,” encapsulates a life of action over words, as he battles the harsh environment, builds communities, and leaves a legacy etched in desert lore. 

Blending historical events with vivid storytelling, McDowell explores themes of perseverance, family, and the human condition, drawing readers into a world where one man’s dream transforms a wasteland. With meticulously researched detailsโ€”from Gruendike’s Well to the Colorado Aqueductโ€”this novel immerses you in the 20th-century West. 

Perfect for fans of historical fiction and Western epics,ย Nuff Sedย is a testament to the enduring power of determination. Join Desert Steveโ€™s extraordinary adventure and discover why his story still resonates today.


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